I'm thinking of doing a couple more stories....but was disappointed by the seemingly lack of response towards the end of my last written saga....
"The Enslavement of Alison"
http://www.cruxforums.com/xf/threads/the-enslavement-of-alison-as-told-by-baracus.6994/
Obviously it was too long and people stopped looking even before I'd got to the juicier bits...![Frown :( :(]()
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(that's the impression I'd got....)
however I do appreciate the comments I'd received....
Hopefully my next...
Bad news.....(perhaps ??)
"The Enslavement of Alison"
http://www.cruxforums.com/xf/threads/the-enslavement-of-alison-as-told-by-baracus.6994/
Obviously it was too long and people stopped looking even before I'd got to the juicier bits...


(that's the impression I'd got....)
however I do appreciate the comments I'd received....
Hopefully my next...
Bad news.....(perhaps ??)